This may not be your best piece in the contest, but I loved it. It was somehow wordy in very little lines, but such details make the images more precise, so that may not be bad at all. Overall, I really liked the incorporation of Northern Lights :)

Love love love it!!

OMG!! jen this is a master piece...i love it all but,

The wind leant on my back
while a maiden succumbed
my corvine eyes. I couldn't help,
but to detonate her hourglass -
pounced on diminished living will.
I mashed up obscurity, sparked it
and died the sky with more yang.

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

@-@!!!!!!

SPEECHLESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

xx

Wow, not much I can say now that my mind is blown :o ...

What a vivid description and what a story you tell here

Pretty intense write , it had a real power from it and I just loved the opening

Sorry it took a while

:)