Comments : Starving

  • 11 years ago

    by Wild flower

    Your tears will fade someday, cause you will foreveer be happy. Really touching piece, great job<3

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Such a deep sadness in this one Maple, I am glad you are able to express this as I would not like for it all to be kept inside. You word your emotions in a way which pulls the reader in and makes them want to reach through the screen and hug you.

    Keep writing them.