Comments : Finding Winter Now

  • 11 years ago

    by abracadabra

    HA! I also wrote a poem called Finding Winter Now, what are the chances? They are both love poems, but nothing alike.

    i.e. Yours is better.

    • 11 years ago

      by slighte

      Oh man really? Oops I seem to remember seeing the title on a prompt list somewhere but that's probably a false memory and I just saw yours and stole the title.. Sorry D: Na I wouldn't say mine is better, rather they are just different haha. Thanks (:

  • 11 years ago

    by Formidable Muse

    "Darling, all I wanted
    was to write you
    as a poem so you could see
    yourself as something beautiful."
    I absolutely love that section, it really caught my attention.

    The entire poem is beautiful, it feels like a mixture o love and bitterness (:

  • 11 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Planning on time, is saving blames. The difference made, lies within Time.

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    This author knows love poetry...WOW! She took me away into the wide world of Romance with this elegant love gem!

    "Darling, all I wanted
    was to write you
    as a poem so you could see
    yourself as something beautiful"

    ^^^ I melted with this beginning stanza, I was a puddle of mush from the very start!
    To write her love as a poem, describing how beautiful he is through words, I really adore the creative twist she took here.

    In my mind, she wants him to see his image within poetry. I got chills for she sees him as more of a poetic piece of art than he sees his self perhaps. I was left speechless by the ending as well.. What a beautiful and creative love poem! Outstanding!!