What a beautiful and elegant rhyme piece! Very pretty! I adore the fairy tale message but I also admire the simplicity of this poem as well... its sweet and romantic, very nice!

Very nice, I hope your princess gets to read this,

1 typo last stanza either 'you are' or 'you're'

nice flow and a real sense of love throughout.

In my view this is really a very sweet poem as it is coming from the true feelings of your heart.