Nicely written .............. a true thinking..........but we never alone..........

Men hey! what gits,.............hold on...
what am I saying? I am a lovely man.

Ok, love the power in this, you clearly learnt from his broken promise and took the power back, Nice poem, nice emotion and anger in places.

What a precious and also heartbreaking piece here Sonia!! You wrapped the beauty of your lost love and also entwined your sorrow of his hurtful ways as well... well done! Love your rhyme scheme... very nice!!

Nice poem sonia..thanks fr sharing..

Thanks all for your support! i only hope i can be as good as you one day :)

Sigh* Its hard for me to read these kind of writes because Ive been in them, Ive wrote stuff just like this and I know it pretty much sucks.

I must say I like the

Abb , Cdd, Eff kind of form rather than rhyming a whole stanza or rhyming every other line, this was kind of different and read different.

Lovely write.

Very nice. you did good. (: