Very well done, I knew a young woman like that in high school

Nice poem! You have portrayed a great image with your words. I could see her clearly walking thru' the night with her thoughts. A very illustrative piece!

Nice poem and sad too... Been sad and pretending to be happy while no one even cares... Great piece..

Powerful imagery you painted. We all at some point feel disheartened with ourselves and actions. We feel diffident to step forward and portray our capabiliies. However, with all the inferiority complex, there's an of amount force driving you to achieve your aims. To set forth and polish yourself, hence, be a better person.

Optimism is to be imbued into us intellectualy. We have to claim it and conform to its attributes. Sidelining any form of negativity is a step ahead. Life is never a smooth sail, we have to push harder at times to be us. A distinctive way of portraying your message.

Written superbly! :-) ..

I feel the pain!! I hope someone gives you a million hugs today and every day!