I love the use of descriptive language that you have used to allow the reader to feel the emotions you went through and to visually see the emotions pouring and being left shattered on the floor. I find this poem very powerful in its underlying message and you captured the emotions and metaphors so well!

5.5 from me

He who brings you pain, helps you learn. A friend, restores hope not sorrow.

Hey,its a very nice poem...i loved ur opening...

You left me in the dark reaching out for the light
You once gave me hope and the desire to fight
But you left me with a broken soul that shattered
Against the floor...
And now I'm slowly trying to be cured...

its so touching!!
well done girl.

Fantastic !!!!! :) Loved that one Kirsty .... Really good :) <---- Claps like nutty seal "Ouut, ouut, ouut" Lolllll Was brilliant that :)