Comments : She is the One....

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!! the flow and rhythm of this piece is just awesome!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Love this!

    I gotta agree with syrup on this your rhymes flow off the tongue on this piece and i like how you used the burning sun towards the end comparing a love one to something i. Nature is always a great way of expressing your feelings towards them :-)

    Great job dude!

  • 11 years ago

    by Andrew Packard

    Yeah, I can relate to this, out loud
    ~Andrew