Comments : February 30 (part 1)

  • 6 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Nice poem..once agn.
    I loved ur idea.

  • 6 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    I LOVE the concept of this poem, comparing elusive love to a day that will never occur, that is beautiful!!!

    The imagery of the opening line was perfect as well. This has my vote for the weekly poetry contest!

  • 6 years ago

    by MyHalozChokinMe

    I too, loved the last line.

    "Its just like February 30."

    Seriously, this was a genius ending.

  • 6 years ago

    by NobodyKnowsItButMe

    Well! Wow! Other than this..... I would simply say... February 30 summarises it all! Nice! Great job!
    5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by Polaroid

    "I can feel the death of my pain"
    I really loved this line. It spoke volumes and really made the poem for me. Its such a beautiful concept.
    Your message was sort of confusing nearer to the end however. for me at least.
    Great job though!

  • 6 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    Great poem
    !

  • 6 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Freeeeeakin Awesome!!!

    Mo....i really loved this write of yours :-)

    your created a really great atmoshpere here, i like it alot :-)

  • 2 years ago

    by Andrew Packard

    I Love this Poem! Especially the Title! Great style too... keep writing!

    • 1 year ago

      by Mohan

      Thank you