Comments : All that remains

  • 11 years ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    Whoa, wow!
    This right here is an excellent poem which has all the emotions a broken hearted poem should have within it.
    I can relate in way through the pain of heartache.
    You were easily able to express the powerful emotions which flowed to paper to pen so magically.
    Really really good, surprised nobody has commented on this.
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Stormy

    Wow, loved this one. Very impressive. Each and every line really stood out. Enjoyed the read. Peace.

  • 11 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    You open with a truly beautiful image, I loved what you've painted in my mind. Then I reached the second stanza and sadness began to set in. I thought the rhyme scheme was great, yet I feel like in places it was lost, the last line of the first stanza and the third stanza.

    This poem speaks of common emotions after a breakup, the feeling as though you have so many questions left to be answered, the sadness, loneliness, and feeling of loss. You'll make it through though! Just takes time. Nicely done.