I hadn't heard of this form before, it's short, simple and interesting. I may try it out!

I really liked this. It had a lot of mystery and I really loved your last line. I like the way you used 'unpick'.. everyone wants people to pick their brains but in this case it's like you want someone to try and figure you out, but at the same time you want to remain secretive. Great write!

This is really cool, I love "Please unpick this cold stubborn mind." It's message gets across the reader is such a strong manner that it leaves you wanting more. With that sentence it'd basically like all of the poetry you've created opens up the floodgates of your mind and allows us, the reader to actually pick your mind and walk inside into a world a reality which is so interesting and full of deep emotion. That is what I got from that one simple sentence..
Excellent.
5/5