Comments : What is my purpose then?

  • 11 years ago

    by Britt

    I think this is definitely a poem everyone can relate to at some point of their lives - why are we here? What's the point? Especially when things don't go well for us, it's hard to imagine that a bad time is worthwhile. But every bad time leads to a good - every wrong turn turns into the right path if we look hard enough for it. Sometimes our purpose is clear, sometimes it isn't. It's about the journey trying to figure out who you are and what you want in life.

    Wow sorry for the rambles.. the poem definitely made me think :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    5/5 first of all!
    Really powerful, you've captured the reader in a question of their own purpose, I enjoy the repetition of "What is my purpose then?" on each new line it grips the reader and helps them see what you are trying to figure out, how you feel what exactly your soul is telling you.
    It's really vivid and the emotions surrounding this piece are so strong, I can't express how much this poem means to me, you've let us deep into your emotions and mind allow us to feel what you feel.
    Stay strong, keep that head up!

  • 11 years ago

    by AngelDust

    Wow. So many emotions run in these piece. The way you asked questions give the poem an extra boost. It's like there were s lot of ideas running through your mind. I like your lay out and structure of this piece. It allows the reader enough time to take in what you're trying to say. Very well put together write :-)

    Danika.