Comments : Die in the flesh (Acrosstomy)

  • 11 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Yes, I indeed liked it, Chelsea:)

    Very creative and with a good message in it as well!

    Well done,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 11 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    ForgottenSoul
    WOW this is different...I am thinking I really like it but: I dont think it needs all those **** I would take all of them out, seriously they are distracting and not needed.

    Lies secrets and talents ofthe*unusual*
    ^^^space

    Pull the part (i hope you like it...) down away from the poem :)

    This is really deep and would really like to see it edited. Unless each of those ** mean something hidden inside this piece. IDK I haven't had coffee yet lol.

    Lostlove~
    Like and unsteady *racehorse* you run
    ^^an not and...
    from my glare.