Comments : He Touched Me

  • 11 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I have to say this is one of the most powerful pieces i have ever read. Thank you for sharing x

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I agree with Ben- One of the most powerful writes Ive read to date... thank you for sharing this piece with us... for me, it touches me deeply... for a man to touch a woman in such a way... is beyond forgivable.... again, thank you for posting this piece ~

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Ok. So this poem really reached out to me and I can relate to this so much. I have to admit I am not one who cries a lot while reading poems but this one really got me and made me very emotional.

    Your poem is a mixed one for me because although it is full of the sandess and torture you endured, and the awful affactes it had on your and those around you. It also brings me hope, because in the end you became this strong person with so much courage and fearlessness that you demanded he would never be able to do this to you again.

    This is what stood out to me the most. Because to go through all that you did, and come out this amazing person who doesn't give in is just amazing and truly inspiring. It brings hope to those who have not yet found the freedom and are still in that trapped place which you wrote about.

    Now for the main part of the poem which was what you went through - I felt all of your emotion writing this and I know that to write about these things means thinking about them and reliving them which is never easy to do so again I admire the fact you let this all out.

    And finally, I want to thank you for sharing this, which took a lot of strength for you to do that and I hope you feel better now for having it out there and not hidden away.

    You are a very talented poet, so don't ever stop writing.