Comments : Fiddlers dream [sestina] Collab

  • 11 years ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    This is my favorite poem I have ever written. It is so beautifully pieced together and full of so much magic and wonder. It was such a fun write, I think together we can take over the world! :p
    Such a excellent poem on both ends of the table, our styles really mash well together.

  • 11 years ago

    by Masked metaphor

    Agreed it was an enjoyable write, we make a great team

  • 11 years ago

    by Britt

    You guys took one of the hardest forms and made an incredible poem... I seriously try all kinds of forms and this is another one that I can't execute.

    You guys did a really great job. I love the words you decided to use as your ending/repetitive words. They are striking yet can hold a lot of contradiction as well. Of course I know the bow you're talking of is the violin bow, but I am thinking more of a compound bow, a hunters weapon, and it gave a whole new different meaning and interpretation to me.

    I love the opening stanza and how it was introduced to the readers. Music really relieves the soul and calms people. Really gorgeous poetry you two, well done!

  • 9 years ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    Still the best. <3