Comments : My world in the dark

  • 12 years ago

    by eco greeny

    Stars can only shine in the darkness...

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    This write is one of those writes where I'm so proud of the writer for letting all the pain and darkness out and within words.... It was a bit difficult to read without punctuation, but you know what? sometimes when we are writing we just have to let it all out... pour it out like tears... and I agree with the above poster... the most precious of gems are hidden... powerful write! thank you for sharing!

  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Death is never the best option. It takes heated cloud, to make rain.

  • 12 years ago

    by Rebirth

    Oh wow, this was really gripping, like i kinda prayed you dont get hurt again after i read the last line. But honestly, getting hurt is all part of life, and i for one agree it sucks, but its part of what makes us who we are. Well i dont know what inspired this, but i do wish you well.