Man this comes from the bottom layer of your soul
There was no way you would have been able to pin such a poem unless you felt it hitting hard deep down your chest
I honestly wonder exactly what is it exactly
That would instigate such feeling
5/5 never the less
Bless you

Somebody has got on the wrong side of you hey
love the anger through this.
short sentences help the pace flow smoothly.

great job, I will ensure I will stay on your good side

; - )

I'm not sure if it's just anger what I felt in this piece of if it was mainly disappointment.. probably a mixture of the two.

Sugar coating words and speaking words and saying that he is trustworthy.. but they are only words. That rang a bell in my head. This is well written Meme.

and definitively it has some words that I will remember.

Wow, this is what you call a vicious poem.

The person that is portrayed sure has a bloodthirsty enemy on his back.

You are right to attack these people who offer sweet words but are not serious about it.
We men can be rude and insensitive that is true. But please do not think that we are all alike. Some of us do have a soul and mean what we say and write.

So don't give up on us ;)

Wow, this is what you call a vicious poem.

The person that is portrayed sure has a bloodthirsty enemy on his back.

You are right to attack these people who offer sweet words but are not serious about it.
We men can be rude and insensitive that is true. But please do not think that we are all alike. Some of us do have a soul and mean what we say and write.

Geuss ill be the first to admit i read this and i thought you were writing about me kinda sad i geuss but i really liked it gave me something to think about and ill ponder
5/5 btw i think its like me cause sometimes i can be a downright horrid human being and other times i can be the best of me