Comments : It Looks Good On Me

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    The challenge is making it past go and collecting $200.

    Roll the dice and change the name of the game

    to One Life Left To Live.

    - adored this part - the idea of life being like a game, you expressed this so well. so unique.

    Sometimes I'm terrified that no one

    will figure me out.

    Loneliness has always looked good on me.

    - this ending made me feel like it was written for me. WE sometimes think we have been so badly damaged or have too much issues that no one is ever going to accept us.

    Great poem. Well done.