Wow this poem has sooo much imagery i gotta say i love it it hurts when the person you love has a daughter i love it my favorite part in this poem is "And just like that, in a haunting thought
The same smile that used to choke me
Reminded me that it was the same, that broke me" very good don't do anything to it! :) 5/5

Lady Ashes

Thanks.

I can imagine the picture gud choice of words

I gave you a 5 you did an awesome job at capturing the moment and walking me through it... Really amazing job, loved it, keep up the writing you're very talented!!!

Thank you both.