Very endearing scene you portray here Ole.

It almost sounds like the scene taken from a novel which makes it even more beautiful.

The only negative thing I found was the sometimes lack of correct punctuation or use of commas. In some parts of the poem it ruins the flow you put into it. Fix these minor mistakes and you have yourself a great poem.

Yes your right, as a Dane, we don't have gramma rules like in English, try to make corrections

Yes your right, as a Dane, we don't have gramma rules like in English, try to make corrections

Sweet poem I like how you talk about the simplest things and how they have so much meaning. When you care about someone just replaying times you spent with them is overwhelming. Romantically sweet..