WOAH THE IMAGERY HERE!!!! AMAZING!! You blow me away.

Yes, the imagery here is amazing. The story is also very good. There were just a few typographical errors I spotted that I thought I'd mention: The title is missing an I (intoxIcated), "My smile couldn't
deny my sudden happyness." -- happiness, "I looked Insane or like a chesure cat of some sort" -- cheshire "the pleasentness" -- pleasantness "Was to much" -- too
Other than that, this is very well written. Enjoyed it very much.