Wow! I absolutely loved this. I found it so thought provoking. All your questions and points were valid and gets the reader to question everything you've said.

Id suggest breaking this up into stanzas to make it more easy to read.

Really loved this topic, I feel I need to go analyze these questions now.

I agree with Chels, you should try and space this out so the layout is seperated and not all as one paragraph, it will make it look more enticing to read.

As for the content of your poem, you really do make us think and it takes forever to move onto the next line because I tried to ignore the questions and just read them but i couldn't because my mind kept trying to answer them !! Very thought provoking.

Well done.