Comments : In the witness box

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Omg Karla!! I have no more nominations left I. Really hope someone nominates this!!

    Incredibly creative!! I loved the opening statement as we all know where it comes from. I love the story in this. The parenthesis added sooo much for this poem. The way your words were somewhat twisted really caught my eye. I. Love. This!!

    Adding to faves :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Decayed

    Oh, dear God.

    I swear to tell the truth,
    and nothing but the whole truth.

    ^ I knew that Karla in this will write something bigger than ever. You got cinematic in this write, that's why I loved it so much.

    The implementation of descriptions between brackets was really bedazzling. It added this touch of reality to it, becoming more credible, more realistic.

    The court setting, the judge, the lawyer speaking, and the witness... those were very smart to use in showcasing a woman was caught red-handed for sprouting wings of freedom.

    Another masterpiece, Karla :)
    I would've nominated it, but it is already nominated. I really hope it wins <3

  • 11 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    This is really different I love the story behind it and I would of never thought to do a poem like this your talent is proved in every word

    Well done :)

    Nomination

  • 11 years ago

    by Mohan

    Nice written

  • 11 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Publish your work. :)

  • 11 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    If only i could vote this poem more..
    this is so so amazing poem..so nicely described,so different subject matter...n how well it has described the deep n serious matter!
    I really really loved it Karla! A LOT!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    Oh karla... What a piece... you put in so much efforts into your poems... Seriously this ones one.of the best I read from u:-)