Comments : A bullet for a pretty girl

  • 11 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    I really like your style, this style is simple but strong in its intensity. Keep on writing, I can tell that there's a lot of power in you that will emerge

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsea

    Very intense. Exactly how I felt when I was younger.... you are a wonderful writer. Keep going, and stay strong!

  • 11 years ago

    by LostWords

    Damn, you are intense. Enough said.

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    This is so powerful it hurt.