Comments : Endless fight

  • 11 years ago

    by mohamad aref numan

    Its really full of love...nice

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Awww sweetheart, this is such a sticky situation. You have to weigh the pros and cons of each person and figure out your feelings sooner rather than later before things get more jumbled up and before it leads to more hurt.

    Also keep in mind there is a different between love and lust. Do you love one? Lust one? Lust both?...

    I wish you luck in the circumstance, but keep writing about it! It could potentially help the confusion :)

    Mwah!

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This was very well written, I like the rhyming in it, it wasnt too much and suited the poem.

    As for the message in the poem, it is hard to be in that situation and perhaps by writing more poems you will figure out what is best for you.

    Great little poem.