Comments : Broken Heart. . .

  • 11 years ago

    by With This Slow Tune I Tell You Goodbye

    Sweetie I'm sooo sorry PM me whenever okay? I'm the manager to this club sweetie granted this is my second account and btw sweetie it's supposed to be not how you wrote there are some grammer mistakes in this poem but you can fix the and the poem itself should be in sad darling oh and the poem was really good regardless of the grammer mistakes and the emotion is good

    • 11 years ago

      by Tim Kline

      I don't care for grammar. . I write my poem, then I post it. No proof read, re-writing. Just a one time go. But thanks.

  • 11 years ago

    by Owner of an Untamed Heart

    I very much liked this piece. Terribly fantastic emotion oozing from your words; such raw feelings. I walked around the grammar errors because, somehow, I was so captivated with each word. 5/5