Tssss...hot! I enjoyed reading this poem (because I don't mind erotica whatsoever) however the best lines were those that weren't openly explicit. The last stanza was my favorite part and the closing line was dramatic (in a good way).

Just a note: Sixth stanza, first line, I believe you want to say, "edge of the bed"

Thank you so much. Also, the change has been made, good eye!

Wow....*jaw on floor* deffently liked it towards the end

The title is what brought me to your page. It reminded me of the Big Bang Theory, which I love! But then the poem was NOT what I was expecting at all.

WOAH!! That was definitely a sexy write. Had me wanting to keep reading. But then the end took a drastic turn. I almost felt sorry for the girl. But this stuff happens where you just realize you don't want the person anymore...it is sad. I really like all your poetry so far. I am impressed with your dark side.

So the title is why I clicked on this a was terribly confused for about 12 seconds when the site asked if I was over 18. It's definitely a clever idea for an erotic title though.

Definitely a very hot poem. I like the format/style it's written in.

I'm not one to read much Erotica, but I've been told that not describing openly explicit lines, like using metaphors and other terms will bring a more captivating image then actually saying pussy. Idk if that makes any sense at all. Just a thought.

But I enjoyed this. I liked the twist at the end.

Explicit but powerful..!!! I could feel the tint while reading it..!! Good job!!