This is elegant Sonia.. I love the softness of this piece and yet I also love the angles of this piece as well...

"it lives in my throat
alters tones of my voice"

^^ quite unique and creative lines there... very nice!

My love to you is pure
it lives in my throat
alters tones of my voice
when I speak to you,
I am soft and tender
like silk touches skin
with innocence and care

I smiled when I read this part.
I absolutely loved the way this was
Thought out and written down. So
Beautiful.

to my heart, you're a soul
to my soul, you're more
passion flows in my blood
making me shiver
filling my brain with joy
and I fall for you
each day in a new way

Another amazing paragraph that leaves
My with a idiotic smile or a teary eyed disposition lol

Sweetheart, you're my sunshine
even when it's dark
even under the rain
you feed me with warmth
with a kiss on my lips
or a gentle touch
I am forever yours

I thought the ending put it off a bit.
Its shorter but also some powerful words in there.
Great poem keep writing

I have to agree with Maple, I also loved the line:
"it lives in my throat
alters tones of my voice"

Beautiful play on words!

Lovely Sonia... I am in love with the beauty of this piece.. it shares such a beautiful bond and speaks your love... Blisful:)

Looooove this poem!!!

I was gonna break it down but ive decided against it lol.....syrup is so right this is such an elegant and graceful write it made me read it four or five time straight off just so i could absorb it....the flow and word choice you created were magical and gave such a cool vibe to the piece...

I really like your subtle use of repettion in it it gave it alot of depth and poise. :-)

Love love loved it :-) great job sweety!

Let not the Start, overwhelm you. Where pleasure is vast, doom is known.