Sonia- I really loved how you crafted this nature piece... It was in depth and spoke of a powerful message... pollution is devastating to out Mother Nature and its sickening... I truly admired this piece!!

Perfection..loved it..

Indeed beautiful.. your poem makes us realise how the beauty is destroyed by our own hands... Very thoughtful and amazing:)

This was very beautiful and relaxing to read, you done an amazing job and really created wonders in this poem, Each stanza on its own held such clear imagery of what you were describing.

Not many people respect the world and all it has inside it and all nature is, but luckily there will always be people who do.

Nice work.

Way to go, Sonia.
I found the 'virgin forest' scenery so alluring :D

And... your ending has this magical touch of showing how you were affected by destroying nature. As if you and nature had one soul, and what happened to it was transmitted to you.

Great!

Beautifully penned Sonia.5/5
Love the way how we humans are destroying our blessed gifts of nature for our greed .Can see it here in India lot of agricultural land is being used for developing of industries.
Mankind has to make real efforts to maintain a balance.....

Wow I've never read a nature poem with such truth. I can see every word as if I was there . You've done a fantastic job.

My green tea turned black,
my heartbeats got faster,
my eyes lost their light,
and my soul lost its master.

The last stranza really did seal it.

Special and imaginative piece.