Comments : Trees

  • 13 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow.... this is beautiful, I love this so short and sweet, It should be a verse on a card, it is just lovely.

    Well done, hope to read more. I love the idea of a tree growing every day but no one ever taking the time to notice this and realise it. Your comparison to love was very creative. I enjoyed this!

    • 13 years ago

      by Donovan

      Thank you! I played around with a few ideas in the poem and actually after i submitted it, I came up with a better ending. The structure of the ending didn't really fit the flow of the rest of the poem in my opinion, but I'm not perfect. Thank you for your compliments!