I like your message in this piece , I believe the meaning Is a lot deeper then the surface words

Well penned :)

Ah, trusting and getting let down...
It hurts so much, at times is even more than just dissapoijtment is pain.

What I like the most is again your words choice.

The title caught my attention... The pain most have been so much that you are seeking revenge though revenge is not good. And I can see your dilemma of what to do and also it enhances the pain felt within the poem. Well done accomplishing that. Also It gives the readerthe option to believe what they want and also to give their opinions towards seeking revenge. Which in my opinion revenge is not the option.

Well done

This piece has so much of emotions and the flow complimented the piece... A very deep and intense poem....
Amazing one!

A very characteristic emotional poem :)

It is hurtful when opening up to someone and sharing certain elements of your life but in the end everything feels like a lie in a way you never thought it would turn out the way it did.

Your poem demonstrates retaliating to an action (which i agree with other isn't good) caused by one whom was dearest to you. But that turned out he should have never been trusted because of lies and dishonesty to you.

5/5

Absolutely beautiful and passionate. It's so sad though. The power in the words made the story so real and alive. I kinda wanted to cry a bit. I loved this piece!

As with your poem Vulture's Prey this is very powerful the reader goes on a journey with the author and they end in the same place feeling the sadness and honesty of the conclusion. Another fantastic piece of work.