Comments : Longingness

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This was so sweet, romantic and kind of fairy-tale like. It spoke to me and while reading this I felt quite teary as I lost my finace and I always think this will be the kind of thing he will be saying to me if he could.

    Nice work.

    • 11 years ago

      by Edward Oropeza

      Yes, but it happens mostly...if only the two of them really care for each other

  • 11 years ago

    by NobodyKnowsItButMe

    Comment chain(poetry club lost souls): its really a good romantic poem...! Nice piece!
    (Keep the chain going....)