Comments : Life Long Lesson

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Soooo nominated! This is amazing. The energy reading this is great, I wondered if this was anything to do with the flaws challenge? This sounds like you are stating who you are, what you do, what things make you you!

    You are so certain of how things are and what you believe in, you stand by this clearly throughout the poem.

    The unique idea in here of comparing yourself with outher things, objects and people. You mention how you are there for your friends to support them and offer advice, and earlier mention you are the person who tells you the truth when you don't really want to hear it.

    The whole poem was brilliant and full of confidence, which you may not always feel, but let this poem remind you of the beautiful and brilliant talented person you are.

    10/10

    • 11 years ago

      by MyHalozChokinMe

      Yes, this started out as my challenge poem but I couldn't find a way to weave a story of how his makes me beautiful so I scrapped it. :)