Comments : You'll never walk alone

  • 11 years ago

    by Wild flower

    Awwwwwww this poem is cute:P hahaha dont ask why.

    The sincerity of it is felt. I liked the idea of listening to the sound of the trees them whispering to the mountains, and listening to the sound of the wind, while in the end you showed it is you who'll guide that person and always be there.
    Great job

  • 11 years ago

    by Jenni

    This is a very inspirational and uplifting poem. I also think that it has a very soft tone to it and the whole atmosphere seems breezy (if that makes any sense :P, will explain though). I mean that the poem feels easy and not forced. It gives the reader the possability to pause and actually inhale your words rather than just let them pass me by. You should write short poems more-often.

    Sorry for not getting to comment as regularely as I used to. =/

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    This reminded me of Pocahontas, the Disney movie where she uses wind a lot to guide her lol. Loved this poem,however, i would change the punctuation a bit. Or maybe I just read it differently or my own way of writing with punctuation is getting in my way of reading it lol

    Regardless I loved this. Love what you're saying. Sometimes we have to be still and just listen.

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow, this is very upbeat and comforting. It offers hope to those who feel alone and reminds them that they are never truly alone.

    Thank you for writing such hopeful words.

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    This is a comforting poem to read. It lets the reader know that there is no certain path that is needed to follow in life, they have to make their own... and that you will always be by their side no matter what.

  • 11 years ago

    by Lemon

    I like the sense of freedom, this poem is very in touch with nature. I like the sentiment behind it, of never being alone. I was feeling down and this cheered me up a bit :)