Comments : Flying Lessons

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Sometimes a woman wants to be free from her body... the body that has been broken by evil chains and battered by demonic souls... this is my interpretation ... Its truly a breathtaking piece...

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow Halo. This poem is just amazing. It tells a very deep story of pain which you have endured and although you might be free from the situation, the pain will alwyas be there with the memories.

    There is so much in this poem, so much emotion and hopelessness for the future. WE can struggle on and survive but yet feel no existance or no moving forward. It is a very lonely feeling.

    I loved the repitition of the "want nothing" this worked so well to describe your story and how you describe the body so frail and think like it could snap at anytime and is slowly fading away into nothing each new day.

    I can see how others may relate to this in different ways, depending on their background and what their past contains. Your wording is always so powerful, right through this poem you threw in unique words which are not seen in every day poetry making this really stand out.

    Thank you for writing and sharing... I always feel comfort in your writing.