Comments : Bullet between the eyes

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Zahra, I felt this poem was really strong, it was one of those poems that someone can read and be touched by, I was.
    It is terrible that these things happen in our world, where people are murdered and killed for just no reason at all, whether it be callous and cold blooded, or during war between countries...

    This piece is really and truly special, it is simple yet so strong and powerful and that is just a gem to read
    xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Decayed

    Fantastic, Zahra....
    so visual.
    and moving...
    heartbreaking, too...
    yet, there were hope between those eyes as you said 'death is a port...'

    Awesome!