OMG I am in love with this, I love the flow and the rhyme, ( yeah I know, I just really can't help falling in love with rhyming poems )

The imagery in this is actually more powerful than perhaps you meant it to be. The stalker verses death by choice, the thunder, the waves which are out of control and thrashing you about. It is all very powerful and the speed of the poem is as fast as I assume someting like this would happen.

Great creative poem, well done.

I like your imaginary description