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It is a nice poem it very disruptive I'm guess of what's has gone on! With explaining and telling it you can really understand and comprehend what you have written nice job keep it up :D 5/5

Im sorry about that if it happen to you or anyone it suck but everything will get better over time :D just keep your head up and keep smiling about what is to come everything will be ok!

Im sorry about that if it happen to you or anyone it suck but everything will get better over time :D just keep your head up and keep smiling about what is to come everything will be ok!

Im sorry about that if it happen to you or anyone it suck but everything will get better over time :D just keep your head up and keep smiling about what is to come everything will be ok!

Thank you that's really nice. I'll remember that.

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