I love the power of this piece! Great job!

Ah!!

Yes, I know someone like this. It must be a sad life ... I like the power in your words and how smooth this sounds. You sound like you really know what you are talking which is what makes this piece powerful.

Drama queens... Can't be happy it seems unless the drama is there.

Awesome. The first image I had of those who buy really cheap "fake" jewellery and think that no one will know. They think by showing off this "gold or bling" they will seem powerful and perfect cos they have money etc etc etc... grrrr.

This whole poem is great because there are so many people like this not in our own lives but just int he world in general and in reality they are nothing more than what they are - it doesnt matter how you try and dress it up, materials dont mean nothing to who you are as a person.

Good venting poem I feel :)

Excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!