Good piece, I found this piece a bit sad because it seems like your love will always be there but this person despite everything will be your friend so in a way that's good. A bit sad for you but if you look at it the other way, you still get to talk to this someone. Sigh...

as far as the poem, I think you are trying to write with rhymes but I feel that this piece doesn't focus much on them.

EDIT: Yeah, actually this poem does focus on rhymes, I just noticed that you have rhymes in each stanza.. also Pace rhymes with face. and There are a few others,. that may not have been intentional.

However, I did like the part where it mention about sand because that's what it does. . . it gets brushed again with the wind or with the water.. :(

Awww... this is so heart-touching.... You created a subtle yet sad atmosphere because you were talking about your fate of love and added some beautiful images around... You are a good writer...
Great piece:)

Really captures the friend-zone feeling. you can tell their affections are somewhere, you just cant ever be there at the right time no matter how quickly you get there. very touching.

Good write, I can totally relate it so much pain involves in loving a friend especially when you are not sure of their love for you. I love this poem because it's so touching and makes me rethink things I should've said to my friend. EP

I would end this with "He'll just be my friend"
Very nice!!!!