Comments : Opprobrious

  • 11 years ago

    by MyHalozChokinMe

    I had been wondering who the other person was that chose this word!!!!

    While this poem is incredibily sad, I thought it was a good write.
    There were pieces that I really related to, that pulled at me a little

    "She's slowly fragmenting by thirds"

    In my mind, while reading this, I was thinking "exactly." Such a good description of being broken down.

    Thanks for sharing Harlea...

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    She's slowly fragmenting by thirds

    ^ such a sad statement to make because thats exactly how much people feel, when theyve been beaten so much (literally or not) their heart is no longer ripped in half, but by thirds.....

    Will she always be insulted?

    ^ this shows its continuous which is what breaks people down so much, the fact that they feel stuck, that theyve accepted that theyll always be abused and they have to deal with it..

    You did a great job with your word! :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Mohan

    Gud written the emotionals are speaking here