Comments : The role of November

  • 11 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    This to me seems like a goodbye to a dear one or perhaps someone you heard about not personally known to you. I feel its always a terrible feeling to loose someone to the cold hands of death. Its not a welcoming guest. Rather an unannounced visitor. It leaves us with mental, physical and emotional disarray. It isn't a feelings that one wishes for another. However, if it comes one can't do nothing but accept it. To keep a relentless faith, persevere and be strong will, will assure one in the long run. The dead should be prayed upon to be basking under the shade of The Almighty. A sadly penned demise poem. Good work!

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    Emotionally captivating!!
    You have expressed your emotions stacked in, so very completely and left no stone unturned.. I would want to echo this again that you are really among the most finest writers I have met on PnQ... your writes showcase sheer creativity, be it sad, happy or just whatever!!
    Nominating!!