Comments : Biosphere

  • 11 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    This is such a pristine dedication to a friend. Am sure he or she will love and appreciate this. I believe dedicating poems are the best and most endearing gifts ever.

    A different kind of tribute whereby you incorporate a nature theme to describe the impact your friend has on you. Like the soothing and tranquil mood that exudes from the presence of nature. It just makes me feel am out there in the green wild with just the sweet sounds from the winds blast, swaying trees, oceans tide and chirping birds. That keeps playing a natural tune to me. Ecstatic colours from the brown and green trees, deep blue ocean, colourful flowers, glaring yellow sunshine, beaming white moonlight, sparkling star, warm dark night and vibrant bright daylight.

    It makes one want to take a walk in the jungle or orchard. Such peaceful moments can only be felt by reading an exquisite poem while out in exotic natures home. I feel am flying in a momentarily deja vu after reading this. So endearing, rich and calming. I loved it, Kudos!