Comments : Cigarettes and Love

  • 11 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    I thought this was yours I could just feel you writing it
    Lol

    Well done on the challenge

    • 11 years ago

      by MyHalozChokinMe

      Lol.

      Thanks Tony.

      I've resigned myself to the fact that I think my "style" of scribing gives me away, even when submitted anonymously.

      *shrugs*

      Such is life.

  • 11 years ago

    by ah satan 666

    Quality Cara,

    Your poem got my vote,

    You do give yourself away...
    but you have your own style that stands
    Out from the crowd... Plus I've read many
    Poems of yours, for the last couple of days.

    Nice work missy :)

    • 11 years ago

      by MyHalozChokinMe

      Ah, Thanks!

      I'm truly honored that you would cast your vote for my cynical comparison of the hazards of smoking and love. :P

      And, you know, I've tried disguising my writes. In hopes that it wouldn't be so obvious, but...I can't mask the straight forward sarcasm.

      lol.

      Again, thank you Natasha. You honor me with your comments. Always.

  • 11 years ago

    by Wafaa

    Waww I voted this one too and I knew it was yours! it's just your words all over it lol and they are amazing!! the way you connected cigarettes with love blew me away.. I reached the end of the poem just staring with eyes wide open at what I just read.. can't find anymore words.. beautiful!

  • 11 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    You know.....when you write....i have to stop and read. And read and read and read lol

    This write is freakin awesome!! I love the way you draw parallels here and as usual your style and word choice is flawless...there is one thing i have found about your writes...and that is this.....they tend to leave me a bit speechless lol i have so much trouble commenting on them because there are so many angles and layers to it i cant focus on one at a time lol

    Seriously i love your writing and adore you xxx