I love the last line, it is very suggestive.

So much atmosphere and big words yet it all flows really smoothly.

great write

Woah this is pretty sexy! I love this!!

when her pheromones enslaved him mercilessly
^^
This is my favorite line. So very true.

You wrote about how the human body really works with attracting a mate or finding one. But you did this is such a way for all to understand and it was very seducing.

Great job!

First..
when her pheromones enslaved him mercilessly,
encircling him with perfumed secrets.

and then
She smelled his intentions naturally
in that stuffy afternoon
and life was not the same anymore
after sweating deliciously together.

karla, karla, and my karla..

EA..

Different topic but brilliantly written... I loved the way you penned this...