*tear*

I like when you write love poetry.

Your metaphors radiate off my screen and touch my face I swear..just beautiful <3

Hell yes!!!

Now thats a frickin love poem..i love the attention to detail in short line here.

The breaks in the lines rather than in a lump give you that extra bit of time to imagine and relate to what your sayin.

This ooooozes adoration!!!

LOVE IT!

Wooooow the feelings in this piece are soo pure, that it became so touchinggg.
Perfectly written!!

Ben is right. (Don't get all egocockomanical now!)

The line pauses are perfect.

Each pause granted me a few moments to picture the image that your words painted for me...

And the one line, that just squeezed my heart the most:

"He is the aged symphony of my endless melody."

Small tangent:
When I read I'll just keep on singing forever, I could hear your voice and pictured you the way I saw you in your video...lol

This was beautiful Andrea <3

Maple, this is so lovely, you take us all on such a roller coaster with your poems, the emotion so different but just as strong in each one. This is a heart melter, but for the right reasons, it gives us a smile with a tear!

<3

I LOVE THIS!
I love it when you right Nature poems, I cry when I read your sad ones and I melt when you right these love poems, you just have it all, and that is what makes you, you.

The gentleness packs a punch, it is so sweet and lovely to read but it has that depth and grit to it,
AWESOME
x

<3