You know what I love the most in your pieces T? Its the strong voice I hear when I read them. Somehow I find myself always reading your pieces pit loud, I do t k ow why?!

"I'm not all for one
but a little to many"
^^
This line in particular caught my attention, I got mixed emotions from it. But I loved how you said it!

Always a fan of your work.
Keep it u :)

xxx

I just like the way you rhyme with such an ease and also with a strong voice.
I actually, can hear you reciting this piece and that is so neat.

My favorite part.. The beginning and the end.

They say it all, the middle is an explanation for me which help me understand this piece. So all in all, everything works with this poem.