Natasha,
to write in both these forms is a tricky thing, because you have to find a four letter word and then incorporate the syllable count to make the Doditsu, now, you did this brilliant, in choosing a simple word and adding a catchy title, you wrote a short piece that was really nice...
our world in which we live is full of greatness, pride, but also there is much heartache and to read a poem on the finer things just really is a joy.

Well done you :)

It's really difficult to write like this, well tried...