Comments : Fallen

  • 11 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Im at work and snuck on for a quick read....and now i can't concentrate and swoooooning somewhat :/

    I'll be back for a proper comment x

  • 11 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Ok, soooo im back...after reading it like a hundred times :/

    This write babe has seriously wrecked me, not just because of the emotions of love in it, how you describe a kiss and how love has over taken you but also how you allowed that to happen, with things in our past it can be difficult....nay on impossible for us to allow these feelings to emerge and flourish....

    To leave our selves open to someone can be a hard thing but to do that and embrace it fully is nothing short of epic (in the true sense of the word)

    This write to me is awesome, not just for the things said but also for the unsaid things and it wrecks me ...totally xxxx