Natasha, even in the shortness of this piece I can feel a deep sadness that brings tears to my eyes, to say that you see light but that light is just the moon, its like you are saying that it means nothing, which just breaks my heart.

Lovely piece, really sad but written perfectly, and simply

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I agree with Tara, this short piece is soo deep, and the more I think whats behind it, the sader it becomes..

Having the light of the moon, is better than nothing, if there's light just hold on to it, it may shine brighter^__^

Great job:)

This maybe short but I loved it
A really unique piece

Well written indeed

Ohh i love this one, I adore poems about the sky and stars and moon, this is very well penned.

It is both hopeful and then dark and sad rolled into one, But I did read this backwards and it creates the opposite meaning of reading it normal.

<3 this !